And still more:
Section 6.6.3
double-clicking again - you only need to single click to access guilds.
Section 6.7
"A greater hive a villainy, danger and iniquity you will never find than the local" - is that supposed to say "A greater hive a villainy, danger and iniquity you will never find than the local
bar"?
"In Privateer Remake the Bar, located at most bases in the known universe represents such establishments." - I don't know what this is suppossed to say, but something's not right.
Change "While stepping in here to have a drink, you can chat to the bar attendant..." to "While stepping in here to have a drink, you can chat
with the bar attendant..."
Section 6.7.1
Same as above - "chat
with the local bar attendant..." instead of "chat to the local bar attendant..." (this happens twice in this section).
Section 6.7.2
"Fixers are representatives of the various Privateer Remake factions with whom it may be possible to converse with" - remove the second "
with".
Section 7.2.2
"How to target a base or planet, and flying there normal drive and autopilot are discussed elsewhere" - I can't quite figure out what this is supposed to say. Maybe "How to target a base or planet, and
how to fly there
using normal navigation or autopilot are discussed elsewhere"?
Figure 18 refers to crashing into the base. AFAIK, you can't do this; you just fly "inside" the 3D model and it dissapears.
Section 7.2.3
Change "Autopilot shortens the transition time between two areas of interest where there are no identifiable hazards nearby..." to "Autopilot shortens the transition time between two areas of interest
when there are no identifiable hazards nearby..."
It says the autopilot light will be off if "a) the player is within 15,000 meters of a destination". This is not true; the autopilot light stays on.
Section 7.2.4
"Note that you are vulnerable to attack while jumping, as your shields are disabled to power the jump drive." My shields stay up when I jump...
Section 7.3.1
"View Reverse - F4 - As a pilot cannot look back through the ship, this view represents a camera mounted and looking to the rear of the ship." Not so - F4 is still the original Privateer rear view (from inside your ship).
Section 7.4
In the "Communications" section, it says "As conversations appear, read from left to right." Is this really necessary?
In the "Missions" section, it says "The objective recorded under missions will change color as well." It would be nice to include a description of what the different colors mean.
In the "Targetting Reticule" section, it says "During combat, you will usually attempt to have your opponent appear in this crosshair when firing." That's not really true, as a lot of times you need to lead your target considerably (I actually find that some shots require such extreme leading that the target is out of the Tarsus' limited filed of view - damn crappy ship).
Change "Where you have a targetted objective in your front viewscreen..." to "
When you have a targetted objective in your front viewscreen..."
In the "Directional Pointer" section, change "Where you have locked onto a target..." to "
When you have locked onto a target..." Also, change "This pointer provides an indication of the direction and location of your current target" to "This pointer provides and indication of the direction you must turn to face your current target" (it is a 2-D vector only, not 3-D).
Section 7.7
"Being able to say hello, engage in psychological battle..." - I like the humor, but this is an incomplete sentence (there is no main verb),
Section 8.1
Somewhere in here there needs to be a description of how your target's shields are displayed on the targetting MFD. Since the remake uses a 3D model in the targetting screen, the depictions of shield levels in the MFD no longer correspond to their location on the targetted ship. The manual needs to explain that, regardless of the target's orientation in the targetting MFD, the shield levels at the top of the MFD are the front of your target.
Section 8.1.1
Change "Firing a weapon will either reduce the surplus energy available" to "Firing a weapon will reduce the surplus energy available"
Section 8.1.2
The missile targetting description refers to a "lock tone". I get no tone, just the diamond. Is that a function of my crap radar, or is there never any tone?
Done for now - through p. 56