WC Sketches Turning Into More Formal Project

The positive feedback from Fongsaunder's first sketch has given him a reason to more formally piece together a few more scenes. The first image below takes place shortly before his original engagement, and the following two shots portray dramatic landing and jumping sequences. Ships from somewhat different timeframes are once again mixed together for an interesting result. Fongsaunder would like to develop a little bit more story and create a small series in the future.

I've given my WC comic a green-light. I've completed the first two pages, nothing fancy, but at least I tried. Page three is still in rough-pencil-sketch form and I'll do it with any free time I have. Feedback would be good though. I just hope I can get at least one page per week or close. I could color it, but I'm using a frakin G1/G2 pen, non waterproof, BIG MISTAKE.... So I'll have to go without colour.