Strikingly Attractive Pair of Jeans

As we did with Maestro (two, three) and Casey (two), we now present... the evolution of Stiletto! Here's part one of three, taken from the first draft of the Wing Commander V script.

2ND LIEUTENANT JEAN TALVERT (CALLSIGN: NEMESIS)

Wingman. Early twenties. Athletic. Strikingly attractive. Also ambitious, driven, and just a bit stubborn. Nemesis is a superb pilot and, although more by-the-book than Dane or Maestro, she's not above taking some serious chances.

Nemesi's feelings toward Dane are complex, to say the least. She thinks Dane is unnecessarily foolhardy; often a danger to himself and those around him. But she also knows he's the only pilot on the Midway who might give her a run for the title of "best." As a result, Nemesis is always competing with Dane; always on the lookout for a way to one up him.

What's more, and Nemesis would never admit this, she is more than a little attracted to Dane. When the two of them interact, sparks fly.

Like her alot. Is Nemesis too much of a mouthful? Perhaps.