Ahh, I lured LOAF into the thread!
Thanks for that detailed answer. Those things sure are interesting to know.
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Caution! Wall of text ahead!
So... to the baron thing: I'm not sure what that title means to the Kilrathi, but here on earth a baron is one of the lesser nobles. I don't think a baron is a clan leader. If there are clan leaders (which I assume) there are not many of them (there are eight clans IIRC, each with billions of members). I recall two Kilrathi nobles with that title, Jukaga and Melek.
Judging by their behaviour (and the behavior of those who deal with them) I just can't believe they could be leaders of one of the clans. Those leaders are incredibly powerful and I would bet those are the only Kilrathi even Thrakath would treat respectful because it is very important to have their loyalty. Each of them has a "family" of billions of Kilrath behind him after all.
Note: The following is just a fiction, a theory that shows what could be possible. I will try to find proof for those but I guess I won't find any. Please stop reading until you see the next starry line if you think you will have to flame me if I write something you don't like.
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So... if they use a similar system like the British do, we have could have the following titles (ordered by rank from left to right, ascending):
Baron, Viscount, Earl/Count, Marquess and Duke
Barons are the lowest rank in the high nobility. There are thousands of them. They control big cities on their clan home worlds or maybe planets, they are administrators who manage those parts of the infrastructure and of course the troops. They might control complete garrisons in war and are found almost everywhere, often as advisers to higher nobles.
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(I'll leave Viscounts out, there always weren't that many on earth and the Kilrathi don't need them
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Earl/Count (The British call their own guys in such positions "Earl" and the rest "Count". I don't know why.)
They control multiple planets or star systems, having Barons who pledge loyalty to them, some may control several colonies. They may have seat in the "senate" (if the Kilrathi have something like that), and in war they control whole fleets of ships. The emperor may hold some of them "captive" on Kilrah, to make sure if their fleets work against him he can kill them.
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(I'll leave Marquess out, for similar reasons as the Viscount)
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A Duke controls a clan. He controls whole sectors and all the forces there. He is incredibly powerful and if I had to make a bet I would bet that he is not on Kilrah if he can avoid it. It is just too dangerous there. Those are the guys who tend to work against the Emperor secretly because they are the ones with the highest chance to become emperor themselves. And of course those might be the guys who wouldn't accept Melek's surrender (A Baron speaking for Kilrah?? WTF?? Unthinkable!) and those would be the ones fighting a civil war after the destruction of Kilrah (compare wars of the Diadochi in greek history). None of them is powerful enough to fight the Terrans alone, which would explain quite well why the war actually stopped after the destruction of Kilrah, but the Kilrathi fought each other.
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Whoever is the Duke of the ruling clan is the Emperor. So Joor'rad nar Kiranka may have been Duke of Kiranka and Emperor of Kilrah.
Melek could have been a Baron with or without own "land", such things also exist in the British empire. Baron fits him, because he was an adviser, he was of high nobility, but he was weak enough to have great fear of Thrakath and if he wasn't Kiranka he was unimportant enough for his clan to send him there because he was expendable.
As for the Redclaws: This might actually be some kind of a family or sip name, and not the translation for a clan name. In order to organize their empire there must have been some sort of structure below the clans. I think it is rather likely that they could be called (ordered by size from left to right, ascending)
sips, families, lineages.
So maybe the complete name of a high noble could sound like:
(name) "nickname" nar (clan) (+ optional (lineage, sip, family)
"Joor'rad nar Kiranka, offspring of Mat'nak, from Graknala's sip of the Snakeskinners"
In this fictional name the family of Joor'rad took the name "Snakeskinners" after Joor'rad defeated the Varni (which are reptiles), so the family name may be based on some historical event where the family played the important role.
The sip name refers to a well-known ancestor who isn't more than a few generations away, in this case the former emperor and grandmother of Joor'rad named Graknala.
The lineage is a bit more abstract, in this case the name is made up and refers to some great hero of ancient times or something like that, and it may even be hard to prove that lineage. We see that in european history quite often, where somebody claims his great-great-grandfather was a cousin of the brother-in-law of the Emperor's niece.
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So why am I posting this, asking for a constructive discussion?
Well, the answer is that in the campaign I'm planning the player character is planned to not exactly be of the highest nobility, but other characters in the cast may be. He will get a higher position because he is a good pilot and shows honor and valor on the battlefield. His squad mates may come from different clans and families and stuff, and some of them are supposed to have a big mouth and gloat what noble lineage they have. Of course they will not like that lowly Kilrathi outdoing them. That will create some dramatic tension I hope.
But for that I will have to give them the possibility to gloat, and I think long titles may be one of the ways to do that.
And before you ask: I will not make up any names, sips, families or titles for any existing characters. They are that well-known that nobody will have to speak their title. Everybody knows them.
So what do you think? Good idea? Bad idea? and why?