First off, good work. I certainly appreciate the effort you're putting into this, as I am dying to watch the movie in (near)DVD-quality instead of the horrible PXS game footage that I have seen up until now.
Questions:
1: Why do you have the Tolwyn/Paladin scene at the very begining? Is this supposed to be moved later on or something? Because it's a scene that would really jar the audiance. They don't know who Blair is, who either of these old men are (Other than Gimli and that Droog) or any information to put the scene in any kind of context. Maybe you were trying to imply that Blair defected because he now lives near the Border worlds? But he was no longer in the military, so it wouldn't be defection unless you was working for Confed and then starting working for the BW. It also makes it a little strange how quickly he goes back to Confed when Maniac approaches. Just my opinion, but this scene is problematic placed here.
2: Aren't the DVD files in fullscreen? Did you matte them or something, or did I just see a weird file on the net that was in the wrong aspect ratio? (PS: I prefer the widescreen, it's probably the OAR since the PC-CD and PSX version are in that format, right?)
3: You are going to add music to the flight scenes, right? They seem bare without it, but I am assuming you edited them sans music so you could use the sound effects and makes cuts without having the music jump around and just haven't gotten around to mixing in the music, yet. (additionally, it would be cool to use music from all the WC games as well as from 4 in these scenes. Based on the Paulson scene you edited, we're probably on the same page in that respect)
Comments:
Some of the scene transistions are jarring. Case in point: After the first Vagabond scene and into the first Catstratch scene. This is extremley hard to avoid, because the scene just start and end with no real establishing shots, Blair moves around the ship and AFAIK there is no way to show that kind of stuff happening. I just added a bunch of wipes to my WC3 DVD to imply a scene change to the audiance. Without them, the audiance might at first think it's still the same scene because of how quick the cut from point A to point B is.
The branching points (when in the game you have to choose how to react) are missing a few frames of audio. So whenever we reach one of those points, there's a split second of audio drop-out that sounds like the disc is skipping or something. This same thing happened to me while editing Wing Commander 3. I fixed it by simply loosing a few frames (I think only one or two) from either end of the two clips, and the sound became seemless.
The way you changed "A Game By Chris Roberts" to "A Movie By Chris Roberts" is pretty seamless.
The audio on the begining of the first Blair scene is missing, and therefore it sound pretty strange. I assume the sound is missing to mask the media report going on in the background that hadn't happened yet by your re-editing of the timeline. I am not sure if you're planning on fixing this, but maybe you can add in a short musical cue, fade it down and then fade the real audio back in at the some point in which is just starts in your 'workprint' edit.
So, those are my thoughts. Looking forward to seeing more.