It looks good. Keep it up.
I agree with LOAF about it having a closed deck And Stary is right too about the fighters being boxed nose to tail instead of in a row.
Here are a few things that I've found that might help. Mostely with the armaments.
Class: Escort Carrier (CVE)
Length:
Mass:
Max Velocity: 247KPS ER p.78-79
Cruise Velocity: 100KPS ER p.78
Acceleration: Gilgamesh class engine system
Max Y/P/R:
Guns: 1 Heavy quad-barreled neutron gun mounted on bow (forward defense).
2 Medium caliber mass driver cannons on either side of the approach deck.
2 Two more beam weapons along the bottom ER p.68
Long range laser cannons ER p.189)
Neutron turret along the bottom. ER p. 290
3? several launch racks for missiles along the bottom
Anti torpedo missile mount on the bottom ER p.250 (forward facing)
2 Particle cannons firing port.
? Stern anti torpedo guns (mass driven shots) ER p.250
Front Shield: Phase Shields
Rear Shield: Phase Shields
Front Armor:
Rear Armor:
Right/Left Armor:
Fighter Complement: 42 craft
Jump Capable: Yes
Crew size: 500 personal
All armaments aboard Tarawa are stored in blast-proof lockers beneath the flight deck. ER p.167
Bridge was located near the topside of the ship just forward of the jump drives. ER p.75
Later modification after Strike Force Valkyrie take out a kilrathi minor orbital base six mass driver mini guns were welded to the ship just forward of the landing air lock for point defense.
Fire retardant nozzles in the bay ceiling p.92
Hooks in the ceiling. p.167