Talk:Wingman's Creed

Okay, here's the first page I've created in full. Let me know how this stacks up. I followed the structure of Confederation Oath of Service for the main text. The name, of course, is provisional, as the article says.

Is this the format we want to use for these creeds (i.e., "Text of the Oath"?) There isn't much room for introduction. What would the header for the Confed Oath say - "The Confederation Oath of Service is the Oath of Service of the Terran Confederation"? It probably isn't the Oath that Blair says he took in the Price of Freedom novel, at any rate.
Bob McDob 05:56, 17 July 2010 (UTC)

This seems fine to me. There's no need for extraneous fluff if it doesn't contribute to the article. (: - Wedge