Talk:First Battle of Kilrah - 2667

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This does need to be totally redone. Writing is poor, facts are wrong and it oversteps its bounds by trying to relate the withdrawal of the Tarawa and Intrepid from Kilrah.

Personally, I'd recommend a rewrite from scratch by someone more familiar with the material.

- Dundradal

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