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Whoa, wait up. That was strictly in reference to the Fralthi II, not the Fralthi as a combat line. | |||
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Revision as of 16:18, 12 July 2009
Blair's first encounter with a Fralthi by no means means it is the FIRST encounter ever. You need to word these correctly.
"The Fralthi was first spotted by Terran Confederation forces, in the Port Hedland System, by the planet McLaren. A short time later, on 2654.140, TCS Tiger's Claw pilots Christopher Blair and Joseph Khumalo encountered the Fralthi while on a patrol as Xi Wing (Port Hedland System)."
Reword this so it becomes clear it's Blair's and not Confed's first encounter.
- Dundradal
Whoa, wait up. That was strictly in reference to the Fralthi II, not the Fralthi as a combat line.
-Aeronautico.
