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Maybe it's time that I correct the flaws in this article. I realize it has a lot of reworking that needs to be done. Question: Should we change the title to "Raid of Kilrah" or something? I know this was officially classified as a raid rather than a battle. (Not much of a difference, but regardless, what sounds more appropriate?) -Aeronautico | |||
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This does need to be totally redone. Writing is poor, facts are wrong and it oversteps its bounds by trying to relate the withdrawal of the Tarawa and Intrepid from Kilrah.
Personally, I'd recommend a rewrite from scratch by someone more familiar with the material.
- Dundradal
Maybe it's time that I correct the flaws in this article. I realize it has a lot of reworking that needs to be done. Question: Should we change the title to "Raid of Kilrah" or something? I know this was officially classified as a raid rather than a battle. (Not much of a difference, but regardless, what sounds more appropriate?) -Aeronautico
