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I tried to rephrase a few things here without being very familiar with this novel character. Would someone please care to review to make sure everything is still okay? Specifically, I'm not sure about the five combat landings date, which previously just had the relative time statement 'last year'. - Wedge | I tried to rephrase a few things here without being very familiar with this novel character. Would someone please care to review to make sure everything is still okay? Specifically, I'm not sure about the five combat landings date, which previously just had the relative time statement 'last year'. - Wedge | ||
First Commando had done 5 combat landings in the last year (so 2666 into 2667). --[[User:Dundradal|Dundradal]] 10:29, 15 August 2010 (CDT) |
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I tried to rephrase a few things here without being very familiar with this novel character. Would someone please care to review to make sure everything is still okay? Specifically, I'm not sure about the five combat landings date, which previously just had the relative time statement 'last year'. - Wedge
First Commando had done 5 combat landings in the last year (so 2666 into 2667). --Dundradal 10:29, 15 August 2010 (CDT)