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"The Fralthi was first spotted by [[Terran Confederation]] forces, in the [[Port Hedland]] System, by the planet [[McLaren]]. A short time later, on [[2654.140]], ''[[TCS Tiger's Claw]]'' pilots [[Christopher Blair]] and [[Joseph Khumalo]] encountered the Fralthi while on a patrol as [[Xi Wing (Port Hedland System)]]." | |||
Reword this so it becomes clear it's Blair's and not Confed's first encounter. | |||
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Revision as of 14:53, 12 July 2009
Blair's first encounter with a Fralthi by no means means it is the FIRST encounter ever. You need to word these correctly.
"The Fralthi was first spotted by Terran Confederation forces, in the Port Hedland System, by the planet McLaren. A short time later, on 2654.140, TCS Tiger's Claw pilots Christopher Blair and Joseph Khumalo encountered the Fralthi while on a patrol as Xi Wing (Port Hedland System)."
Reword this so it becomes clear it's Blair's and not Confed's first encounter.
- Dundradal
