Talk:Vesuvius-class heavy carrier: Difference between revisions

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  - Sylvester
  - Sylvester
Ok great. Just gave it a quick once over. Looks pretty good. My only suggestion is that where you currently have the radar image for the target recognition we eventually replace it with a 5 angle shot and move the radar image to a gallery at the end of the article. Otherwise, nice work.
- Dundradal

Revision as of 03:12, 19 March 2009

This article does not follow the capship article template. It also isn't an article about the Vesuvius class, it's more about the TCS Vesuvius itself. As it stands now this article will most likely be deleted and recreated in the proper format at the time when we reach it. We are currently focused on WC1.

Thanks

- Dundradal

I've deleted most of the info on the Vesuvius. That should be a separate article. I've tried to clear up some of the presumptive details. This is just a start. I will be returning to this page for further improvement shortly.

- Aeronautico

New Info

I've re written this article and cleaned up its formatting using information from WC4, the WC4 Novel and the CIC.

- Sylvester


Ok great. Just gave it a quick once over. Looks pretty good. My only suggestion is that where you currently have the radar image for the target recognition we eventually replace it with a 5 angle shot and move the radar image to a gallery at the end of the article. Otherwise, nice work.

- Dundradal