Talk:Geoffrey Tolwyn: Difference between revisions
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Phew! That was a very long article to review. I suggest that someone with copious spare time might like to break up the article into appropriate sections. - Wedge | Phew! That was a very long article to review. I suggest that someone with copious spare time might like to break up the article into appropriate sections. - Wedge | ||
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We ought to keep the question marks in the birth date. We don't know exactly when he or Kruger were born. - [[User:Bob McDob|Bob]] 15:40, 20 August 2010 (CDT) | |||
Revision as of 20:40, 20 August 2010
I started the Tolwyn article as I felt it was time to add him to the database. All of this data comes straight from the CIC Encyclopedia and may require some new edits and such. If anyone wants to help me improve this article, I'd appreciate it. This is just to get it started, I am aware that the Encyclopedia has its errors and I will fix them as I find them. -Aeronautico
Phew! That was a very long article to review. I suggest that someone with copious spare time might like to break up the article into appropriate sections. - Wedge
We ought to keep the question marks in the birth date. We don't know exactly when he or Kruger were born. - Bob 15:40, 20 August 2010 (CDT)
