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    Chapter XIII - Homeward

    Well sometimes it pays to employ the K.I.S.S. principle...especially if you're half-asleep.
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    Recall - First Contact

    Then it's time to turn about. *shrug* Well they looked squidlike to me. Anybody else care to comment on the origin of Steltek...or am I left to my own devices on this one?
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    Recall - First Contact

    klaus: Only when I have to. Quarto: Ever hear the expression, "Too many cooks spoil the broth?" The ship is there to help the pilot, not fly for him...though survival could be a directive. <BLOCKQUOTE><font size="1" face="Arial">quote:</font><HR>Ah, but if it doesn't have feelings then why...
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    Chapter XIII - Homeward

    5. One unwashed patient more is one more possible infected ward, that's the difference. I agree the comment was a good idea but this is a hospital for goodness sakes. It would have been a completely different matter if they had just dumped him in a bunk to sleep it off.
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    Recall - First Contact

    Well I'm glad the originality aspect was well received thus far. I just want to push the boundary of intuitive piloting a bit. I'm pretty sure most pilots feel at one with their machines. Imagine what a blend of mechanics and organics could do to the way humans pilot their vehicles...
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    Recall - First Contact

    Quarto: Yer right laddie. T'aint up to date yet, but it's only missing this chapter which I'll probably add tommorrow. Vondoom: You can see what I've written so far of Privateer: Recall here http://home.elka.pw.edu.pl/~mkorzen1/wc/Recall.html And I'd appreciate you pointing out those...
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    Need help in WC IV playing

    Which makes me wonder how many people using the chat zone can read. *flee*
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    Chapter XIII - Homeward

    5. Yes well nurses do have certain...um...duties. 10. But then you have an overfondness of elipsis. 12. Nor any manners. 18. Alright, I'm going already. 19. There were quite a few more. I only pointed out this particular one and 21 because the others weren't as incorrect as those. 23...
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    Need help in WC IV playing

    Um, is this really the right CIC chat zone to be discussing this?
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    Recall - First Contact

    It's been a long time coming but I hope I can develop the ideas contained below in some interesting ways. 2681.039.0526 - First Contact James yawned profusely. He hadn't slept all too well. The excitement had kept him tossing and turning in his bunk for hours. When he finally drifted off, a...
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    Chapter XIII - Homeward

    Ah so you've finally show up again. Yes as a matter of fact I'm posting First Contact just now. The comments on comments you will have to wait for.
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    Chapter XIII - Homeward

    Well it's been a while, but here are my comments - finally. <OL TYPE=1> <LI>&gt;XIII. Homeward.&lt; - Odd sort of title I must say since I'm quite sure Weaver knows just where home is...yet. <LI>&gt;With friends like this, he would always be safe!&lt; - Only his friends can't land for him...
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    Chapter XII - Solo

    2. Actually in that particular case I preferred gravity-less - and I wouldn't trust word too much since it suggested gravitity. 4. I remember that perfectly well but I dinna have a reference feline on paw before. 8. It just seemed like one of those gray areas that needed filling and you did...
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    Chapter XII - Solo

    <BLOCKQUOTE><font size="1" face="Arial">quote:</font><HR>'Bout tyme! <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> Aw keep yer shirt on. I did pick the nits in the end didn't I? 2. &gt;He approached the door slowly, sticking his hands out so as not to smash headlong into it in this gravity-less environment.&lt; - Lesee...
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    Chapter XII - Solo

    <OL TYPE=1> <LI>&gt;sticking his hands out&lt; - How about stretching instead? <LI>&gt;into it in this&lt; - Consider rewording somehow. <LI>&gt;He frowned, feeling strange, jagged holes beneath his fingers.&lt; - Sounds like he felt strange and not the jagged holes were strange. <LI>&gt;three...
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